Lectura Conjunta: Oathbringer –Capítulos 1-3 – (Spoilers)

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    Part One: United
    Dalinar * Shallan * Kaladin * Adolin

     

    Chapter 1
    Broken and Divided

    I’m certain some will feel threatened by this record. Some few may feel liberated. Most will simply feel that it should not exist.
    —From Oathbringer, preface

    Dalinar Kholin appeared in the vision standing beside the memory of a dead god.

    It had been six days since his forces had arrived at Urithiru, legendary holy tower city of the Knights Radiant. They had escaped the arrival of a new devastating storm, seeking refuge through an ancient portal. They were settling into their new home hidden in the mountains.

    And yet, Dalinar felt as if he knew nothing. He didn’t understand the force he fought, let alone how to defeat it. He barely understood the storm, and what it meant in returning the Voidbringers, ancient enemies of men.

    So he came here, into his visions. Seeking to pull secrets from the god—named Honor, or the Almighty—who had left them. This particular vision was the first that Dalinar had ever experienced. It began with him standing next to an image of the god in human form, both perched atop a cliff overlooking Kholinar: Dalinar’s home, seat of the government. In the vision, the city had been destroyed by some unknown force.

    The Almighty started speaking, but Dalinar ignored him. Dalinar had become a Knight Radiant by bonding the Stormfather himself—soul of the highstorm, most powerful spren on Roshar—and Dalinar had discovered he could now have these visions replayed for him at will. He’d already heard this monologue three times, and had repeated it word for word to Navani for transcription.

    This time, Dalinar instead walked to the edge of the cliff and knelt to look out upon the ruins of Kholinar. The air smelled dry here, dusty and warm. He squinted, trying to extract some meaningful detail from the chaos of broken buildings. Even the windblades—once magnificent, sleek rock formations exposing countless strata and variations—had been shattered.

    The Almighty continued his speech. These visions were like a diary, a set of immersive messages the god had left behind. Dalinar appreciated the help, but right now he wanted details.

    He searched the sky and discovered a ripple in the air, like heat rising from distant stone. A shimmer the size of a building.

    “Stormfather,” he said. “Can you take me down below, into the rubble?”

    You are not supposed to go there. That is not part of the vision.

    “Ignore what I’m supposed to do, for the moment,” Dalinar said. “Can you do it? Can you transport me to those ruins?”

    The Stormfather rumbled. He was a strange being, somehow connected to the dead god, but not exactly the same thing as the Almighty. At least today he wasn’t using a voice that rattled Dalinar’s bones.

    In an eyeblink, Dalinar was transported. He no longer stood atop the cliff, but was on the plains down before the ruins of the city.

    “Thank you,” Dalinar said, striding the short remaining distance to the ruins.

    Only six days had passed since their discovery of Urithiru. Six days since the awakening of the Parshendi, who had gained strange powers and glowing red eyes. Six days since the arrival of the new storm—the Everstorm, a tempest of dark thunderheads and red lightning.

    Some in his armies thought that it was finished, the storm over as one catastrophic event. Dalinar knew otherwise. The Everstorm would return, and would soon hit Shinovar in the far west. Following that, it would course across the land.

    Nobody believed his warnings. Monarchs in places like Azir and Thaylenah admitted that a strange storm had appeared in the east, but they didn’t believe it would return.

    They couldn’t guess how destructive this storm’s return would be. When it had first appeared, it had clashed with the highstorm, creating a unique cataclysm. Hopefully it would not be as bad on its own—but it would still be a storm blowing the wrong way. And it would awaken the world’s parshman servants and make them into Voidbringers.

    What do you expect to learn? the Stormfather said as Dalinar reached the rubble of the city. This vision was constructed to draw you to the ridge to speak with Honor. The rest is backdrop, a painting.

    “Honor put this rubble here,” Dalinar said, waving toward the broken walls heaped before him. “Backdrop or not, his knowledge of the world and our enemy couldn’t help but affect the way he made this vision.”

    Dalinar hiked up the rubble of the outer walls. Kholinar had been… storm it, Kholinar was . . . a grand city, like few in the world. Instead of hiding in the shadow of a cliff or inside a sheltered chasm, Kholinar trusted in its enormous walls to buffer it from highstorm winds. It defied the winds, and did not bow to the storms.

    In this vision, something had destroyed it anyway. Dalinar crested the detritus and surveyed the area, trying to imagine how it had felt to settle here so many millennia ago. Back when there had been no walls. It had been a hardy, stubborn lot who had grown this place.

    He saw scrapes and gouges on the stones of the fallen walls, like those made by a predator in the flesh of its prey. The windblades had been smashed, and from up close he could see claw marks on one of those as well.

    “I’ve seen creatures that could do this,” he said, kneeling beside one of the stones, feeling the rough gash in the granite surface. “In my visions, I witnessed a stone monster that ripped itself free of the underlying rock.

    “There are no corpses, but that’s probably because the Almighty didn’t populate the city in this vision. He just wanted a symbol of the coming destruction. He didn’t think Kholinar would fall to the Everstorm, but to the Voidbringers.”

    Yes, the Stormfather said. The storm will be a catastrophe, but not nearly on the scale of what follows. You can find refuge from storms, Son of Honor. Not so with our enemies.

    Now that the monarchs of Roshar had refused to listen to Dalinar’s warning that the Everstorm would soon strike them, what else could Dalinar do? The real Kholinar was reportedly consumed by riots—and the queen had gone silent. Dalinar’s armies had limped away from their first confrontation with the Voidbringers, and even many of his own highprinces hadn’t joined him in that battle.

    A war was coming. In awakening the Desolation, the enemy had rekindled a millennia-old conflict of ancient creatures with inscrutable motivations and unknown powers. Heralds were supposed to appear and lead the charge against the Voidbringers. The Knights Radiant should have already been in place, prepared and trained, ready to face the enemy. They were supposed to be able to trust in the guidance of the Almighty.

    Instead, Dalinar had only a handful of new Radiants, and there was no sign of help from the Heralds. And beyond that, the Almighty—God himself—was dead.

    Somehow, Dalinar was supposed to save the world anyway.

    The ground started to tremble; the vision was ending with the land falling away. Atop the cliff, the Almighty would have just concluded his speech.

    A final wave of destruction rolled across the land like a highstorm. A metaphor designed by the Almighty to represent the darkness and devastation that was coming upon humankind.

    Your legends say that you won, he had said. But the truth is that we lost.

    And we are losing. . . .

    The Stormfather rumbled. It is time to go.

    “No,” Dalinar said, standing atop the rubble. “Leave me.”

    But—

    “Let me feel it!”

    The wave of destruction struck, crashing against Dalinar, and he shouted defiance. He had not bowed before the highstorm; he would not bow before this! He faced it head-on, and in the blast of power that ripped apart the ground, he saw something.

    A golden light, brilliant yet terrible. Standing before it, a dark figure in black Shardplate. The figure had nine shadows, each spreading out in a different direction, and its eyes glowed a brilliant red.

    Dalinar stared deep into those eyes, and felt a chill wash through him. Though the destruction raged around him, vaporizing rocks, those eyes frightened him more. He saw something terribly familiar in them.

    This was a danger far beyond even the storms.

    This was the enemy’s champion. And he was coming.

    UNITE THEM. QUICKLY.

    Dalinar gasped as the vision shattered. He found himself sitting beside Navani in a quiet stone room in the tower city of Urithiru. Dalinar didn’t need to be bound for visions any longer; he had enough control over them that he had ceased acting them out while experiencing them.

    He breathed deeply, sweat trickling down his face, his heart racing. Navani said something, but for the moment he couldn’t hear her. She seemed distant compared to the rushing in his ears.

    “What was that light I saw?” he whispered.

    I saw no light, the Stormfather said.

    “It was brilliant and golden, but terrible,” Dalinar whispered. “It bathed everything in its heat.”

    Odium, the Stormfather rumbled. The enemy.

    The god who had killed the Almighty. The force behind the Desolations.

    “Nine shadows,” Dalinar whispered, trembling.

    Nine shadows? The Unmade. His minions, ancient spren.

    Storms. Dalinar knew of them from legend only. Terrible spren who twisted the minds of men.

    Still, those eyes haunted him. As frightening as it was to contemplate the Unmade, he feared that figure with the red eyes the most. Odium’s champion.

    Dalinar blinked, looking to Navani, the woman he loved, her face painfully concerned as she held his arm. In this strange place and stranger time, she was something real. Something to hold on to. A mature beauty—in some ways the picture of a perfect Vorin woman: lush lips, light violet eyes, silvering black hair in perfect braids, curves accentuated by the tight silk havah. No man would ever accuse Navani of being scrawny.

    “Dalinar?” she asked. “Dalinar, what happened? Are you well?”

    “I’m…” He drew in a deep breath. “I’m well, Navani. And I know what we must do.”

    Her frown deepened. “What?”

    “I have to unite the world against the enemy faster than he can destroy it.”

    He had to find a way to make the other monarchs of the world listen to him. He had to prepare them for the new storm and the Voidbringers. And, barring that, he had to help them survive the effects.

    But if he succeeded, he wouldn’t have to face the Desolation alone. This was not a matter of one nation against the Voidbringers. He needed the kingdoms of the world to join him, and he needed to find the Knights Radiant who were being created among their populations.

    Unite them.

    “Dalinar,” she said, “I think that’s a worthy goal… but storms, what of ourselves? This mountainside is a wasteland—what are we going to feed our armies?”

    “The Soulcasters—”

    “Will run out of gemstones eventually,” Navani said. “And they can create only the basic necessities. Dalinar, we’re half frozen up here, broken and divided. Our command structure is in disarray, and it—”

    “Peace, Navani,” Dalinar said, rising. He pulled her to her feet. “I know. We have to fight anyway.”

    She embraced him. He held to her, feeling her warmth, smelling her perfume. She preferred a less floral scent than other women—a fragrance with spice to it, like the aroma of newly cut wood.

    “We can do this,” he told her. “My tenacity. Your brilliance. Together, we will convince the other kingdoms to join with us. They’ll see when the storm returns that our warnings were right, and they’ll unite against the enemy. We can use the Oathgates to move troops and to support each other.”

    The Oathgates. Ten portals, ancient fabrials, were gateways to Urithiru. When a Knight Radiant activated one of the devices, those people standing upon its surrounding platform were brought to Urithiru, appearing on a similar device here at the tower.

    They only had one pair of Oathgates active now—the ones that moved people back and forth between Urithiru and the Shattered Plains. Nine more could theoretically be made to work—but unfortunately, their research determined that a mechanism inside each of them had to be unlocked from both sides before they’d work.

    If he wanted to travel to Vedenar, Thaylen City, Azimir, or any of the other locations, they’d first need to get one of their Radiants to the city and unlock the device.

    “All right,” she said. “We’ll do it. Somehow we’ll make them listen—even if they’ve got their fingers planted firmly in their ears. Makes one wonder how they manage it, with their heads rammed up their own backsides.”

    He smiled, and suddenly thought himself foolish for idealizing her just earlier. Navani Kholin was not some timid, perfect ideal—she was a sour storm of a woman, set in her ways, stubborn as a boulder rolling down a mountain and increasingly impatient with things she considered foolish.

    He loved her the most for that. For being open and genuine in a society that prided itself on secrets. She’d been breaking taboos, and hearts, since their youth. At times, the idea that she loved him back seemed as surreal as one of his visions.

    A knock came at the door to his room, and Navani called for the person to enter. One of Dalinar’s scouts poked her head in through the door. Dalinar turned, frowning, noting the woman’s nervous posture and quick breathing.

    “What?” he demanded.

    “Sir,” the woman said, saluting, face pale. “There’s… been an incident. A corpse discovered in the corridors.”

    Dalinar felt something building, an energy in the air like the sensation of lightning about to strike. “Who?”

    “Highprince Torol Sadeas, sir,” the woman said. “He’s been murdered.”


    Chapter 2
    One Problem Solved

    I needed to write it anyway.
    —From Oathbringer, preface
    “Stop! What do you think you’re doing?” Adolin Kholin strode over to a group of workers in crem-stained work outfits who were unloading boxes from the back of a wagon. Their chull twisted, trying to search out rockbuds to munch on. Fruitlessly. They were deep within the tower, for all the fact that this cavern was as large as a small town.

    The workers had the decency to look chagrined, though they probably didn’t know what for. A flock of scribes trailing Adolin checked the contents of the wagon. Oil lamps on the ground did little to push back the darkness of the enormous room, which had a ceiling that went up four stories.

    “Brightlord?” one of the workers asked, scratching at his hair beneath his cap. “I was just unloadin’. That’s what I think I was doin’.”

    “Manifest says beer,” Rushu—a young ardent—told Adolin.

    “Section two,” Adolin said, rapping the knuckles of his left hand against the wagon. “Taverns are being set up along the central corridor with the lifts, six crossroads inward. My aunt expressly told your highlords this.”

    The men just stared at him blankly.

    “I can have a scribe show you. Pick these boxes back up.”

    The men sighed, but started reloading their wagon. They knew better than to argue with the son of a highprince.

    Adolin turned to survey the deep cavern, which had become a dumping ground for both supplies and people. Children ran past in groups. Workers set up tents. Women gathered water at the well in the center. Soldiers carried torches or lanterns. Even axehounds raced this way and that. Four entire warcamps full of people had frantically crossed the Shattered Plains to Urithiru, and Navani had struggled to find the right spot for them all.

    For all the chaos, though, Adolin was glad to have these people. They were fresh; they hadn’t suffered the battle with the Parshendi, the attack of the Assassin in White, and the terrible clash of two storms.

    The Kholin soldiers were in terrible shape. Adolin’s own sword hand was wrapped and still throbbing, his wrist broken during the fighting. His face had a nasty bruise, and he was one of the more lucky ones.

    “Brightlord,” Rushu said, pointing at another wagon. “That looks like wines.”

    “Delightful,” Adolin said. Was nobody paying attention to Aunt Navani’s directives?

    He dealt with this wagon, then had to break up an argument among men who were angry they had been set to hauling water. They claimed that was parshman work, beneath their nahn. Unfortunately, there were no parshmen any longer.

    Adolin soothed them and suggested they could start a water haulers’ guild if forced to continue. Father would approve that for certain, though Adolin worried. Would they have the funds to pay all these people? Wages were based on a man’s rank, and you couldn’t just make slaves of men for no reason.

    Adolin was glad for the assignment, to distract him. Though he didn’t have to see to each wagon himself—he was here to supervise—he threw himself into the details of the work. He couldn’t exactly spar, not with his wrist in this shape, but if he sat alone too long he started thinking about what had happened the day before.

    Had he really done that?

    Had he really murdered Torol Sadeas?

    It was almost a relief when at long last a runner came for him, whispering that something had been discovered in the corridors of the third floor.

    Adolin was certain he knew what it was.


    Dalinar heard the shouts long before he arrived. They echoed down the tunnels. He knew that tone. Conflict was near.

    He left Navani and broke into a run, sweating as he burst into a wide intersection between tunnels. Men in blue, lit by the harsh light of lanterns, faced off against others in forest green. Angerspren grew from the floor like pools of blood.

    A corpse with a green jacket draped over the face lay on the ground.

    “Stand down!” Dalinar bellowed, charging into the space between the two groups of soldiers. He pulled back a bridgeman who had gotten right up in the face of one of Sadeas’s soldiers. “Stand down, or I’ll have you all in the stockade, every man!”

    His voice hit the men like stormwinds, drawing eyes from both sides. He pushed the bridgeman toward his fellows, then shoved back one of Sadeas’s soldiers, praying the man would have the presence of mind to resist attacking a highprince.

    Navani and the scout stopped at the fringes of the conflict. The men from Bridge Four finally backed down one corridor, and Sadeas’s soldiers retreated up the one opposite. Just far enough that they could still glare at one another.

    “You’d better be ready for Damnation’s own thunder,” Sadeas’s officer shouted at Dalinar. “Your men murdered a highprince!”

    “We found him like this!” Teft of Bridge Four shouted back. “Probably tripped on his own knife. Serves him well, the storming bastard.”

    “Teft, stand down!” Dalinar shouted at him.

    The bridgeman looked abashed, then saluted with a stiff gesture.

    Dalinar knelt, pulling the jacket back from Sadeas’s face. “That blood is dried. He’s been lying here for some time.”

    “We’ve been looking for him,” said the officer in green. “Looking for him? You lost your highprince?”

    “The tunnels are confusing!” the man said. “They don’t go natural directions. We got turned about and…”

    “Thought he might have returned to another part of the tower,” a man said. “We spent last night searching for him there. Some people said they thought they’d seen him, but they were wrong, and…”

    And a highprince was left lying here in his own gore for half a day, Dalinar thought. Blood of my fathers.

    “We couldn’t find him,” the officer said, “because your men murdered him and moved the body—”

    “That blood has been pooling there for hours. Nobody moved the body.” Dalinar pointed. “Place the highprince in that side room there and send for Ialai, if you haven’t. I want to have a better look.”


    Dalinar Kholin was a connoisseur of death.

    Even since his youth, the sight of dead men had been a familiar thing to him. You stay on the battlefield long enough, and you become familiar with its master.

    So Sadeas’s bloodied, ruined face didn’t shock him. The punctured eye, smashed up into the socket by a blade that had been rammed into the brain. Fluid and blood had leaked out, then dried.

    A knife through the eye was the sort of wound that killed an armored man wearing a full helm. It was a maneuver you practiced to use on the battlefield. But Sadeas had not been wearing armor and had not been on a battlefield.

    Dalinar leaned down, inspecting the body lit by flickering oil lanterns as it lay on the table.

    “Assassin,” Navani said, clicking her tongue and shaking her head. “Not good.”

    Behind him, Adolin and Renarin gathered with Shallan and a few of the bridgemen. Across from Dalinar stood Kalami; the thin, orange-eyed woman was one of his more senior scribes. They’d lost her husband, Teleb, in the battle against the Voidbringers. He hated to call upon her in her time of grief, but she insisted that she remain on duty.

    Storms, he had so few high officers left. Cael had fallen in the clash between Everstorm and highstorm, almost making it to safety. He’d lost Ilamar and Perethom to Sadeas’s betrayal at the Tower. The only highlord he had left was Khal, who was still recuperating from a wound he’d taken during the clash with the Voidbringers—one he’d kept to himself until everyone else was safe.

    Even Elhokar, the king, had been wounded by assassins in his palace while the armies were fighting at Narak. He’d been recuperating ever since. Dalinar wasn’t certain if he would come to see Sadeas’s body or not.

    Either way, Dalinar’s lack of offi ers explained the room’s other occupants: Highprince Sebarial and his mistress, Palona. Likable or not, Sebarial was one of the two living highprinces who had responded to Dalinar’s call to march for Narak. Dalinar had to rely on someone, and he didn’t trust most of the highprinces farther than the wind could blow them.

    Sebarial, along with Aladar—who had been summoned but had not yet arrived—would have to form the foundation of a new Alethkar. Almighty help them all.

    “Well!” said Palona, hands on hips as she regarded Sadeas’s corpse. “I guess that’s one problem solved!”

    Everyone in the room turned toward her.

    “What?” she said. “Don’t tell me you weren’t all thinking it.”

    “This is going to look bad, Brightlord,” Kalami said. “Everyone is going to act like those soldiers outside and assume you had him assassinated.”

    “Any sign of the Shardblade?” Dalinar asked.

    “No, sir,” one of the bridgemen said. “Whoever killed him probably took it.”

    Navani rubbed Dalinar on the shoulder. “I wouldn’t have put it as Palona did, but he did try to have you killed. Perhaps this is for the best.”

    “No,” Dalinar said, voice hoarse. “We needed him.”

    “I know you’re desperate, Dalinar,” Sebarial said. “My presence here is sufficient proof of that. But surely we haven’t sunk so far as to be better off with Sadeas among us. I agree with Palona. Good riddance.”

    Dalinar looked up, inspecting those in the room. Sebarial and Palona. Teft and Sigzil, the lieutenants from Bridge Four. A handful of other soldiers, including the young scout woman who had fetched him. His sons, steady Adolin and impenetrable Renarin. Navani, with her hand on his shoulder. Even the aging Kalami, hands clasped before her, meeting his eyes and nodding.

    “You all agree, don’t you?” Dalinar asked.

    Nobody objected. Yes, this murder was inconvenient for Dalinar’s reputation, and they certainly wouldn’t have gone so far as to kill Sadeas themselves. But now that he was gone… well, why shed any tears?

    Memories churned inside Dalinar’s head. Days spent with Sadeas, listening to Gavilar’s grand plans. The night before Dalinar’s wedding, when he’d shared wine with Sadeas at a rowdy feast that Sadeas had organized in his name.

    It was hard to reconcile that younger man, that friend, with the thicker, older face on the slab before him. The adult Sadeas had been a murderer whose treachery had caused the deaths of better men. For those men, abandoned during the battle at the Tower, Dalinar could feel only satisfaction at finally seeing Sadeas dead.

    That troubled him. He knew exactly how the others were feeling. “Come with me.”

    He left the body and strode out of the room. He passed Sadeas’s guards, who hurried back in. They would deal with the corpse; hopefully he’d defused the situation enough to prevent an impromptu clash between his forces and theirs. For now, the best thing to do was get Bridge Four away from here.

    Dalinar’s retinue followed him through the halls of the cavernous tower, bearing oil lamps. The walls were twisted with lines—natural strata of alternating earthy colors, like those made by crem drying in layers. He didn’t blame the soldiers for losing track of Sadeas; it was strikingly easy to get lost in this place, with its endless passageways all leading into darkness.

    Fortunately, he had an idea of where they were, and led his people to the outer rim of the tower. Here he strode through an empty chamber and stepped out onto a balcony, one of many similar ones that were like wide patios.

    Above him rose the enormous tower city of Urithiru, a strikingly high structure built up against the mountains. Created from a sequence of ten ringlike tiers—each containing eighteen levels—the tower city was adorned with aqueducts, windows, and balconies like this one.

    The bottom floor also had wide sections jutting out at the perimeter: large stone surfaces, each a plateau in its own right. They had stone railings at their edges, where the rock fell away into the depths of the chasms between mountain peaks. At first, these wide flat sections of stone had baffled them. But the furrows in the stone, and planter boxes on the inner edges, had revealed their purpose. Somehow, these were fields. Like the large spaces for gardens atop each tier of the tower, this area had been farmed, despite the cold. One of these fields extended below this balcony, two levels down.

    Dalinar strode up to the edge of the balcony and rested his hands on the smooth stone retaining wall. The others gathered behind him. Along the way they’d picked up Highprince Aladar, a distinguished bald Alethi with dark tan skin. He was accompanied by May, his daughter: a short, pretty woman in her twenties with tan eyes and a round face, her jet-black Alethi hair worn short and curving around her face. Navani whispered to them the details of Sadeas’s death.

    Dalinar swept his hand outward in the chill air, pointing away from the balcony. “What do you see?”

    The bridgemen gathered to look off the balcony. Their number included the Herdazian, who now had two arms after regrowing the one with Stormlight. Kaladin’s men had begun manifesting powers as Windrunners— though apparently they were merely “squires.” Navani said it was a type of apprentice Radiant that had once been common: men and women whose abilities were tied to their master, a full Radiant.

    The men of Bridge Four had not bonded their own spren, and—though they had started manifesting powers—had lost their abilities when Kaladin had flown to Alethkar to warn his family of the Everstorm.

    “What do I see?” the Herdazian said. “I see clouds.”

    “Lots of clouds,” another bridgeman added.

    “Some mountains too,” another said. “They look like teeth.” “Nah, horns,” the Herdazian argued.

    “We,” Dalinar interrupted, “are above the storms. It’s going to be easy to forget the tempest the rest of the world is facing. The Everstorm will return, bringing the Voidbringers. We have to assume that this city—our armies— will soon be the only bastion of order left in the world. It is our calling, our duty, to take the lead.”

    “Order?” Aladar said. “Dalinar, have you seen our armies? They fought an impossible battle only six days ago, and despite being rescued, we technically lost. Roion’s son is woefully underprepared for dealing with the remnants of his princedom. Some of the strongest forces—those of Thanadal and Vamah—stayed behind in the warcamps!”

    “The ones who did come are already squabbling,” Palona added. “Old Torol’s death back there will only give them something else to dissent about.”

    Dalinar turned around, gripping the top of the stone wall with both hands, fingers cold. A chill wind blew against him, and a few windspren passed like little translucent people riding on the breeze.

    “Brightness Kalami,” Dalinar said. “What do you know of the Desolations?”

    “Brightlord?” she asked, hesitant.

    “The Desolations. You’ve done scholarly work on Vorin theory, yes? Can you tell us of the Desolations?”

    Kalami cleared her throat. “They were destruction made manifest, Brightlord. Each one was so profoundly devastating that humankind was left broken. Populations ruined, society crippled, scholars dead. Humankind was forced to spend generations rebuilding after each one. Songs tell of how the losses compounded upon one another, causing us to slide farther each time, until the Heralds left a people with swords and fabrials and returned to find them wielding sticks and stone axes.”

    “And the Voidbringers?” Dalinar asked.

    “They came to annihilate,” Kalami said. “Their goal was to wipe humankind from Roshar. They were specters, formless—some say they are spirits of the dead, others spren from Damnation.”

    “We will have to find a way to stop this from happening again,” Dalinar said softly, turning back to the group. “We are the ones this world must be able to look to. We must provide stability, a rallying point.

    “This is why I cannot rejoice to find Sadeas dead. He was a thorn in my side, but he was a capable general and a brilliant mind. We needed him. Before this is through, we’ll need everyone who can fight.”

    “Dalinar,” Aladar said. “I used to bicker. I used to be like the other highprinces. But what I saw on that battlefield… those red eyes… Sir, I’m with you. I will follow you to the ends of the storms themselves. What do you want me to do?”

    “Our time is short. Aladar, I name you our new Highprince of Information, in command of the judgment and law of this city. Establish order in Urithiru and make sure that the highprinces have clearly delineated realms of control within it. Build a policing force, and patrol these hallways. Keep the peace, and prevent clashes between soldiers like the one we avoided earlier.

    “Sebarial, I name you Highprince of Commerce. Account our supplies and establish marketplaces in Urithiru. I want this tower to become a functioning city, not just a temporary waystop.

    “Adolin, see that the armies are put into a training regimen. Count the troops we have, from all the highprinces, and convey to them that their spears will be required for the defense of Roshar. So long as they remain here, they are under my authority as Highprince of War. We’ll crush their squabbling beneath a weight of training. We control the Soulcasters, and we control the food. If they want rations, they’ll have to listen.”

    “And us?” the scruffy lieutenant of Bridge Four asked.

    “Continue to explore Urithiru with my scouts and scribes,” Dalinar said. “And let me know the moment your captain returns. Hopefully he will bring good news from Alethkar.”

    He took a deep breath. A voice echoed in the back of his mind, as if distant. Unite them.

    Be ready for when the enemy’s champion arrives.

    “Our ultimate goal is the preservation of all Roshar,” Dalinar said softly. “We’ve seen the cost of division in our ranks. Because of it, we failed to stop the Everstorm. But that was just the trial run, the sparring before the real fight. To face the Desolation, I will find a way to do what my ancestor the Sunmaker failed to do through conquest. I will unify Roshar.”

    Kalami gasped softly. No man had ever united the entire continent— not during the Shin invasions, not during the height of the Hierocracy, not during the Sunmaker’s conquest. This was his task, he was increasingly certain. The enemy would unleash his worst terrors: the Unmade and the Voidbringers. That phantom champion in the dark armor.

    Dalinar would resist them with a unified Roshar. Such a shame he hadn’t found a way to somehow convince Sadeas to join in his cause.

    Ah, Torol, he thought. What we could have done together, if we hadn’t been so divided.…

    “Father?” A soft voice drew his attention. Renarin, who stood beside Shallan and Adolin. “You didn’t mention us. Me and Brightness Shallan. What is our task?”

    “To practice,” Dalinar said. “Other Radiants will be coming to us, and you two will need to lead them. The knights were once our greatest weapon against the Voidbringers. They will need to be so again.”

    “Father, I…” Renarin stumbled over the words. “It’s just… Me? I can’t. I don’t know how to… let alone…”

    “Son,” Dalinar said, stepping over. He took Renarin by the shoulder. “I trust you. The Almighty and the spren have granted you powers to defend and protect this people. Use them. Master them, then report back to me what you can do. I think we’re all curious to find out.”

    Renarin exhaled softly, then nodded.


    Chapter 3
    Momentum

    THIRTY-FOUR YEARS AGO
    Rockbuds crunched like skulls beneath Dalinar’s boots as he charged across the burning field. His elites pounded after him, a handpicked force of soldiers both lighteyed and dark. They weren’t an honor guard. Dalinar didn’t need guards. These were simply the men he considered competent enough not to embarrass him.

    Around him, rockbuds smoldered. Moss—dried from the summer heat and long days between storms this time of year—flared up in waves, setting the rockbud shells alight. Flamespren danced among them. And, like a spren himself, Dalinar charged through the smoke, trusting in his padded armor and thick boots to protect him.

    The enemy—pressed on the north by his armies—had pulled back into this town just ahead. With some difficulty Dalinar had waited, so he could bring his elites in as a flanking force.

    He hadn’t expected the enemy to fire this plain, desperately burning their own crops to block the southern approach. Well, the fires could go to Damnation. Though some of his men were overwhelmed by the smoke or heat, most stayed with him. They’d crash into the enemy, pressing them back against the main army.

    Hammer and anvil. His favorite kind of tactic: the type that didn’t allow his enemies to get away from him.

    As Dalinar burst from the smoky air, he found a few lines of spearmen hastily forming ranks on the southern edge of the town. Anticipationspren— like red streamers growing from the ground and whipping in the wind— clustered around them. The low town wall had been torn down in a contest a few years back, so the soldiers had only rubble as a fortification—though a large ridge to the east made a natural windbreak against the storms, which had allowed this place to sprawl almost like a real city.

    Dalinar bellowed at the enemy soldiers, beating his sword—just an ordinary longsword—against his shield. He wore a sturdy breastplate, an openfronted helm, and iron-reinforced boots. The spearmen ahead of him wavered as his elites roared from amid the smoke and flame, shouting a bloodthirsty cacophony.

    A few of the spearmen dropped their weapons and ran. Dalinar grinned. He didn’t need Shards to intimidate.

    He hit the spearmen like a boulder rolling through a grove of saplings, his sword tossing blood into the air. A good fight was about momentum. Don’t stop. Don’t think. Drive forward and convince your enemies that they’re as good as dead already. That way, they’ll fight you less as you send them to their pyres.

    The spearmen thrust their spears frantically—less to try to kill, more to try to push away this madman. Their ranks collapsed as too many of them turned their attention toward him.

    Dalinar laughed, slamming aside a pair of spears with his shield, then disemboweling one man with a blade deep in the gut. The man dropped his spear in agony, and his neighbors backed away at the horrific sight. Dalinar came in with a roar, killing them with a sword that bore their friend’s blood.

    Dalinar’s elites struck the now-broken line, and the real slaughter began. He pushed forward, keeping momentum, shearing through the ranks until he reached the back, then breathed deeply and wiped ashen sweat from his face. A young spearman wept on the ground nearby, screaming for his mother as he crawled across the stone, trailing blood. Fearspren mixed with orange, sinewy painspren all around. Dalinar shook his head and rammed his sword down into the boy’s back as he passed.

    Men often cried for their parents as they died. Didn’t matter how old they were. He’d seen greybeards do it, same as kids like this one. He’s not much younger than me, Dalinar thought. Maybe seventeen. But then, Dalinar had never felt young, regardless of his age.

    His elites carved the enemy line in two. Dalinar danced, shaking off his bloodied blade, feeling alert, excited, but not yet alive. Where was it?

    Come on.…

    A larger group of enemy soldiers was jogging down the street toward him, led by several officers in white and red. From the way they suddenly pulled up, he guessed they were alarmed to find their spearmen falling so quickly.

    Dalinar charged. His elites knew to watch, so he was quickly joined by fifty men—the rest had to finish off the unfortunate spearmen. Fifty would do. The crowded confines of the town would mean Dalinar shouldn’t need more.

    He focused his attention on the one man riding a horse. The fellow wore plate armor obviously meant to resemble Shardplate, though it was only of common steel. It lacked the beauty, the power, of true Plate. He still looked like he was the most important person around. Hopefully that would mean he was the best.

    The man’s honor guard rushed to engage, and Dalinar felt something stir inside him. Like a thirst, a physical need.

    Challenge. He needed a challenge!

    He engaged the first member of the guard, attacking with a swift brutality. Fighting on a battlefield wasn’t like dueling in an arena; Dalinar didn’t dance around the fellow, testing his abilities. Out here, that sort of thing got you stabbed in the back by someone else. Instead, Dalinar slammed his sword down against the enemy, who raised his shield to block. Dalinar struck a series of quick, powerful blows, like a drummer pounding out a furious beat. Bam, bam, bam, bam!

    The enemy soldier clutched his shield over his head, leaving Dalinar squarely in control. Dalinar raised his own shield before him and shoved it against the man, forcing him back until he stumbled, giving Dalinar an opening.

    This man didn’t get a chance to cry for his mother.

    The body dropped before him. Dalinar let his elites handle the others; the way was open to the brightlord. Who was he? The highprince fought to the north. Was this some other important lighteyes? Or… didn’t Dalinar remember hearing something about a son during Gavilar’s endless planning meetings?

    Well, this man certainly looked grand on that white mare, watching the battle from within his helm’s visor, cape streaming around him. The foe raised his sword to his helm toward Dalinar in a sign of challenge accepted.

    Idiot.

    Dalinar raised his shield arm and pointed, counting on at least one of his strikers to have stayed with him. Indeed, Jenin stepped up, unhooked the shortbow from his back, and—as the brightlord shouted his surprise— shot the horse in the chest.

    “Hate shooting horses,” Jenin grumbled as the beast reared in pain. “Like throwing a thousand broams into the storming ocean, Brightlord.”

    “I’ll buy you two when we finish this,” Dalinar said as the brightlord tumbled off his horse. Dalinar dodged around flashing hooves and squeals of pain, seeking out the fallen man. He was pleased to find the enemy rising.

    They engaged, sweeping at one another, frantic. Life was about momentum. Pick a direction and don’t let anything—man or storm—turn you aside. Dalinar battered at the brightlord, driving him backward, furious and persistent.

    He felt like he was winning the contest, controlling it, right up until he slammed his shield at the enemy and—in the moment of stress—felt something snap. One of the straps that held the shield to his arm had broken.

    The enemy reacted immediately. He shoved the shield, twisting it around Dalinar’s arm, snapping the other strap. The shield tumbled free.

    Dalinar staggered, sweeping with his sword, trying to parry a blow that didn’t come. The brightlord instead lunged in close and rammed Dalinar with his shield.

    Dalinar ducked the blow that followed, but the backhand hit him solidly on the side of the head, sending him stumbling. His helm twisted, bent metal biting into his scalp, drawing blood. He saw double, his vision swimming.

    He’s coming in for the kill.

    Dalinar roared, swinging his blade up in a lurching, wild parry that connected with the brightlord’s weapon and swept it completely out of his hands.

    The man instead punched Dalinar in the face with a gauntlet. His nose crunched.

    Dalinar fell to his knees, sword slipping from his fingers. His foe was breathing deeply, cursing between breaths, winded by the short, frantic contest. He reached to his belt for a knife.

    An emotion stirred inside Dalinar.

    It was a fire that filled the pit within. It washed through him and awakened him, bringing clarity. The sounds of his elites fighting the brightlord’s honor guard faded, metal on metal becoming clinks, grunts becoming merely a distant humming.

    Dalinar smiled. Then the smile became a toothy grin. His vision returned as the brightlord—knife in hand—looked up and started, stumbling back. He seemed horrified.

    Dalinar roared, spitting blood and throwing himself at the enemy. The swing that came at him seemed pitiful and Dalinar ducked it, ramming his shoulder against his foe’s lower body. Something thrummed inside Dalinar, the pulse of the battle, the rhythm of killing and dying.

    The Thrill.

    He knocked his opponent off balance, then went searching for his sword. Dym, however, hollered Dalinar’s name and tossed him a poleaxe, with a hook on one side and a broad, thin axe blade on the other. Dalinar seized it from the air and spun, hooking the brightlord around the ankle with the axehead, then yanked.

    The brightlord fell in a clatter of steel. Before Dalinar could capitalize on this, two men of the honor guard managed to extricate themselves from Dalinar’s men and come to the defense of their brightlord.

    Dalinar swung and buried the axehead into one guard’s side. He ripped it free and spun again—smashing the weapon down on the rising brightlord’s helm and sending him to his knees—before coming back and barely catching the remaining guard’s sword on the haft of the poleaxe.

    Dalinar pushed upward, holding the poleaxe in two hands, sweeping the guard’s blade into the air over his head. Dalinar stepped forward until he was face-to-face with the fellow. He could feel the man’s breath.

    He spat blood draining from his nose into the guard’s eyes, then kicked him in the stomach. He turned toward the brightlord, who was trying to flee. Dalinar growled, full of the Thrill. He swung the poleaxe with one hand, hooking the spike into the brightlord’s side, and yanked, dropping him yet again.

    The brightlord rolled over. He was greeted by the sight of Dalinar slamming his poleaxe down with both hands, driving the spike right through the breastplate and into his chest. It made a satisfying crunch, and Dalinar pulled it out bloodied.

    As if that blow had been a signal, the honor guard finally broke before his elites. Dalinar grinned as he watched them go, gloryspren popping up around him as glowing golden spheres. His men unhooked shortbows and shot a good dozen of the fleeing enemy in the back. Damnation, it felt good to best a force larger than your own.

    Nearby, the fallen brightlord groaned softly. “Why…” the man said from within his helm. “Why us?”

    “Don’t know,” Dalinar said, tossing the poleaxe back to Dym.

    “You… you don’t know?” the dying man said.

    “My brother chooses,” Dalinar said. “I just go where he points me.” He gestured toward the dying man, and Dym rammed a sword into the armored man’s armpit, finishing the job. The fellow had fought reasonably well; no need to extend his suffering.

    Another soldier approached, handing Dalinar his sword. It had a chip the size of a thumb right in the blade. Looked like it had bent as well. “You’re supposed to stick it into the squishy parts, Brightlord,” Dym said, “not pound it against the hard parts.”

    “I’ll keep that in mind,” Dalinar said, tossing the sword aside as one of his men selected a replacement from among the fallen.

    “You… all right, Brightlord?” Dym asked.

    “Never been better,” Dalinar said, voice faintly distorted by the clogged nose. Hurt like Damnation itself, and he drew a small flock of painspren— like little sinewy hands—up from the ground.

    His men formed up around him, and Dalinar led the way farther down the street. Before too long, he could make out the bulk of the enemy still fighting ahead, harried by his army. He halted his men, considering his options.

    Thakka, captain of the elites, turned to him. “Orders, sir?”

    “Raid those buildings,” Dalinar said, pointing at a line of homes. “Let’s see how well they fight while they watch us rounding up their families.”

    “The men will want to loot,” Thakka said.

    “What is there to loot in hovels like these? Soggy hogshide and old rockbud bowls?” He pulled off his helm to wipe the blood from his face. “They can loot afterward. Right now I need hostages. There are civilians somewhere in this storming town. Find them.”

    Thakka nodded, shouting the orders. Dalinar reached for some water. He’d need to meet up with Sadeas, and—

    Something slammed into Dalinar’s shoulder. He caught only a brief sight of it, a black blur that hit with the force of a roundhouse kick. It threw him down, and pain flared up from his side.

    He blinked as he found himself lying on the ground. A storming arrow sprouted from his right shoulder, with a long, thick shaft. It had gone straight through the chain mail, just to the side of where his cuirass met his arm.

    “Brightlord!” Thakka said, kneeling, shielding Dalinar with his body. “Kelek! Brightlord, are you—”

    “Who in Damnation shot that?” Dalinar demanded.

    “Up there,” one of his men said, pointing at the ridge above the town.

    “That’s got to be over three hundred yards,” Dalinar said, shoving Thakka aside and standing. “That can’t—”

    He was watching, so he was able to jump out of the way of the next arrow, which dropped a mere foot from him, cracking against the stone ground. Dalinar stared at it, then started shouting. “Horses! Where are the storming horses!”

    A small group of soldiers came trotting forward, bringing all eleven horses, which they’d guided carefully across the field. Dalinar had to dodge another arrow as he seized the reins of Fullnight, his black gelding, and heaved himself into the saddle. The arrow in his arm was a cutting pain, but he felt something more pressing drawing him forward. Helping him focus.

    He galloped back the way they’d come in, getting out of the archer’s sight, trailed by ten of his best men. There had to be a way up that slope.… There! A rocky set of switchbacks, shallow enough that he didn’t mind running Fullnight up them.

    Dalinar worried that by the time he reached the top, his quarry would have escaped. However, when he eventually burst onto the top of the ridge, an arrow slammed into his left breast, going straight through the breastplate near the shoulder, nearly throwing him from the saddle.

    Damnation! Dalinar hung on somehow, clenching the reins in one hand, and leaned low, peering ahead as the archer—still a distant figure—stood upon a rocky knob and launched another arrow. And another. Storms, the fellow was quick!

    He jerked Fullnight to one side, then the other, feeling the thrumming sense of the Thrill surge within him. It drove away the pain, let him focus.

    Ahead, the archer finally seemed to grow alarmed, and leaped from his perch to flee.

    Dalinar charged Fullnight over that knob a moment later. The archer turned out to be a man in his twenties wearing rugged clothing, with arms and shoulders that looked like they could have lifted a chull. Dalinar had the option of running him down, but instead galloped Fullnight past and kicked the man in the back, sending him sprawling.

    He pulled up his horse, the motion sending a spike of pain through his arm. He forced it down, eyes watering, and turned toward the archer, who lay in a heap amid spilled black arrows.

    Dalinar lurched from the saddle, an arrow sprouting from each shoulder, as his men caught up. He seized the archer and hauled the fellow to his feet, noting the blue tattoo on his cheek. The archer gasped and stared at Dalinar. He expected he was quite a sight, covered in soot from the fires, his face a mask of blood from the nose and the cut scalp, stuck with not one but two arrows.

    “You waited until my helm was off,” Dalinar demanded. “You are an assassin. You were set here specifically to kill me.”

    The man winced, then nodded.

    “Amazing!” Dalinar said, letting go of the fellow. “Show me that shot again. How far is that, Thakka? I’m right, aren’t I? Over three hundred yards?”

    “Almost four,” Thakka said, pulling over his horse. “But with a height advantage.”

    “Still,” Dalinar said, stepping up to the lip of the ridge. He looked back at the befuddled archer. “Well? Grab your bow!”

    “My… bow?” the archer said.

    “Are you deaf, man?” Dalinar snapped. “Go get it!”

    The archer regarded the ten elites on horseback, grim-faced and dangerous, before wisely deciding to obey. He picked up an arrow, then his bow—which was made of a sleek black wood Dalinar didn’t recognize.

    “Went right through my storming armor,” Dalinar muttered, feeling at the arrow that had hit him on the left. That one didn’t seem too bad—it had punctured the steel, but had lost most of its momentum in doing so. The one on his right, though, had cut through the chain and was sending blood down his arm.

    He shook his head, shading his eyes with his left hand, inspecting the battlefield. To his right, the armies clashed, and his main body of elites had come up to press at the flank. The rearguard had found some civilians and was shoving them into the street.

    “Pick a corpse,” Dalinar said, pointing toward an empty square where a skirmish had happened. “Stick an arrow in one down there, if you can.”

    The archer licked his lips, still seeming confused. Finally, he took a spyglass off his belt and studied the area. “The one in blue, near the overturned cart.”

    Dalinar squinted, then nodded. Nearby, Thakka had climbed off his horse and had slid out his sword, resting it on his shoulder. A not-so-subtle warning. The archer drew his bow and launched a single black-fletched arrow. It flew true, sticking into the chosen corpse.

    A single awespren burst around Dalinar, like a ring of blue smoke. “Stormfather! Thakka, before today, I’d have bet you half the princedom that such a shot wasn’t possible.” He turned to the archer. “What’s your name, assassin?”

    The man raised his chin, but didn’t reply.

    “Well, in any case, welcome to my elites,” Dalinar said. “Someone get the fellow a horse.”

    “What?” the archer said. “I tried to kill you!”

    “Yes, from a distance. Which shows remarkably good judgment. I can make use of someone with your skills.”

    “We’re enemies!”

    Dalinar nodded toward the town below, where the beleaguered enemy army was—at long last—surrendering. “Not anymore. Looks like we’re all allies now!”

    The archer spat to the side. “Slaves beneath your brother, the tyrant.”

    Dalinar let one of his men help him onto his horse. “If you’d rather be killed, I can respect that. Alternatively, you can join me and name your price.”

    “The life of my brightlord Yezriar,” the archer said. “The heir.”

    “Is that the fellow… ?” Dalinar said, looking to Thakka.

    “. . . That you killed down below? Yes, sir.”

    “He’s got a hole in his chest,” Dalinar said, looking back to the assassin. “Tough break.”

    “You… you monster! Couldn’t you have captured him?”

    “Nah. The other princedoms are digging in their heels. Refuse to recognize my brother’s crown. Games of catch-me with the high lighteyes just encourage people to fight back. If they know we’re out for blood, they’ll think twice.” Dalinar shrugged. “How about this? Join with me, and we won’t pillage the town. What’s left of it, anyway.”

    The man looked down at the surrendering army.

    “You in or not?” Dalinar said. “I promise not to make you shoot anyone you like.”

    “I…”

    “Great!” Dalinar said, turning his horse and trotting off.

    A short time later, when Dalinar’s elites rode up to him, the sullen archer was on a horse with one of the other men. The pain surged in Dalinar’s right arm as the Thrill faded, but it was manageable. He’d need surgeons to look at the arrow wound.

    Once they reached the town again, he sent orders to stop the looting. His men would hate that, but this town wasn’t worth much anyway. The riches would come once they started into the centers of the princedoms.

    He let his horse carry him in a leisurely gait through the town, passing soldiers who had settled down to water themselves and rest from the protracted engagement. His nose still smarted, and he had to forcibly prevent himself from snorting up blood. If it was well and truly broken, that wouldn’t turn out well for him.

    Dalinar kept moving, fighting off the dull sense of… nothingness that often followed a battle. This was the worst time. He could still remember being alive, but now had to face a return to mundanity.

    He’d missed the executions. Sadeas already had the local highprince’s head—and those of his officers—up on spears. Such a showman, Sadeas was. Dalinar passed the grim line, shaking his head, and heard a muttered curse from his new archer. He’d have to talk to the man, reinforce that in striking at Dalinar earlier, he’d shot an arrow at an enemy. That was to be respected. If he tried something against Dalinar or Sadeas now, it would be different. Thakka would already be searching out the fellow’s family.

    “Dalinar?” a voice called.

    He stilled his horse, turning toward the sound. Torol Sadeas—resplendent in golden yellow Shardplate that had already been washed clean—pushed through a cluster of officers. The red-faced young man looked far older than he had a year ago. When they’d started all this, he’d still been gangly youth. No longer.

    “Dalinar, are those arrows? Stormfather, man, you look like a thornbush! What happened to your face?”

    “A fist,” Dalinar said, then nodded toward the heads on spears. “Nice work.”

    “We lost the crown prince,” Sadeas said. “He’ll mount a resistance.”

    “That would be impressive,” Dalinar said, “considering what I did to him.”

    Sadeas relaxed visibly. “Oh, Dalinar. What would we do without you?”

    “Lose. Someone get me something to drink and a pair of surgeons. In that order. Also, Sadeas, I promised we wouldn’t pillage the city. No looting, no slaves taken.”

    “You what?” Sadeas demanded. “Who did you promise?”

    Dalinar thumbed over his shoulder at the archer.

    “Another one?” Sadeas said with a groan.

    “He’s got amazing aim,” Dalinar said. “Loyal, too.” He glanced to the side, where Sadeas’s soldiers had rounded up some weeping women for Sadeas to pick from.

    “I was looking forward to tonight,” Sadeas noted.

    “And I was looking forward to breathing through my nose. We’ll live. More than can be said for the kids we fought today.”

    “Fine, fine,” Sadeas said, sighing. “I suppose we could spare one town. A symbol that we are not without mercy.” He looked over Dalinar again. “We need to get you some Shards, my friend.”

    “To protect me?”

    “Protect you? Storms, Dalinar, at this point I’m not certain a rockslide could kill you. No, it just makes the rest of us look bad when you accomplish what you do while practically unarmed!”

    Dalinar shrugged. He didn’t wait for the wine or the surgeons, but instead led his horse back to gather his elites and reinforce the orders to guard the city from looting. Once finished, he walked his horse across smoldering ground to his camp.

    He was done living for the day. It would be weeks, maybe months, before he got another opportunity.

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    Sasori
    Sasori on #5157

    He metido en cajas los capis 2 y 3 para que no sea tan ladrillo de la muerte, si alguien tiene algún problema para ver el contenido que me avise y lo arreglamos. Aun no he tenido oportunidad de ponerme a leer nada, tengo que revisar primero los links y eso. Tenemos una semana para poder reflexionar lo que queramos, no hay prisa. Si veis algo raro avisadme también plz. En cuanto pueda pongo mis reflexiones.
    Como offtopic, ¿que os parece la foto de la esfera? La he hecho yo xD.

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    Violín
    Violín on #5159

    Mucha chicha en solo dos capítulos. No comentaré sobre el flashback puesto que ya se ha hablado mucho de el. Es bueno saber que el Padre Tormenta y Dalinar tienen una relación cordial, este aspecto me preocupaba un poco. Lo más curioso es que ahora tiene la habilidad de controlar las visiones a su antojo y verlas cuando lo necesite. Lo malo es que no sé si podemos fiarnos de de su deducción respecto al campeón de Odium con unos ojos familiares y que proyecta nueve sombras, por no mencionar la luz dorada. Yo personalmente pienso que es en realidad Odium con sus nueve unmade, no creo que sea su campeón, los campeones se baten en duelos para decidir una contienda, no lideran las contiendas…o eso se supone. Ahora el echo de que sus ojos resulten familiares a Dalinar da pie a considerar que efectivamente es su campeón, alguien que conocemos ( yo apuesto por Gavilar ). Pero su campeon es también quien lidera y dirige a los Unmade? No me convence. La idea de Odium con sus unmade me encaja más. La luz dorada sin embargo me tiene confuso. Se supone que el color de Odium es negro, pero claro, en Scadrial también Hay ojos rojos con otro Dios rondando por ahí, así que no se que pensar. Ojo rojos frente a una luz dorada y terrible… Con una armadura esquirlas negra… Al parecer las habilidades de los escuderos están sujetas a las mismas limitaciones de proximidad que un Radiante y su spren. Me pregunto que habilidades pueden ser. Las mismas que Kaladin? Puede ser, pero la redacción sugiere que las habilidades van más halla de sanar con luz tormentosa. Me parece que a Dalinar va a ser más que el líder de los Radiantes. Unificar el continente?. Eso no suena como a una alianza entre paises más bien a una unificación con todas las de la ley, lo cual seamos sinceros me parece más práctico, el problemas es que va justo de tiempo. Ah y se va a liar en esa torre. Se puede mascar la tragedia desde ya. Empieza fuerte.

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    Yourigath on #5160

    Ahora el echo de que sus ojos resulten familiares a Dalinar da pie a considerar que efectivamente es su campeón, alguien que conocemos ( yo apuesto por Gavilar ).

    Recuerda que en el primer libro existe esta parte de la “sinopsis” en que dice…

    “There are four whom we watch. The first is the surgeon, forced to put aside healing to become a soldier in the most brutal war of our time. The second is the assassin, a murderer who weeps as he kills. The third is the liar, a young woman who wears a scholar’s mantle over the heart of a thief. The last is the highprince, a warlord whose eyes have opened to the past as his thirst for battle wanes.

    The world can change. Surgebinding and Shardwielding can return; the magics of ancient days can become ours again. These four people are key.

    One of them may redeem us.

    And one of them will destroy us.

    Ese podría ser el Campeón de Odium (y no, no busques la idea de Campeón como duelista, piensa más en el Avatar de Odium).

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    Wenfe on #5161

    Yo creo que el campeón de Odium va a ser Adolin. En los foros ingleses se ha especulado mucho sobre esta idea y a mí especialmente no me gusta la verdad.

    Teniendo en cuenta que el cuarteto de protagonistas (Kal, shallan,dalinar y szeth) ,dudo que ninguno de ellos se pase al otro bando, shallan lo descontamos porque de duelos no tiene ni idea. Kal y Dalinar demasiado honorables y szeth parece que va por un camino de redención

    Quizás Eshonai se ajusta más,creo que además el último libro antes del time-skip era el suyo, por lo que podría encajar. Por lo que espero que sea ella y no Adolin
    Aunque se me hace atractiva la idea de que un protagonista se vuelva malo

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    Violín
    Violín on #5163

    Yo creo que el campeón de Odium va a ser Adolin. En los foros ingleses se ha especulado mucho sobre esta idea y a mí especialmente no me gusta la verdad.

    Teniendo en cuenta que el cuarteto de protagonistas (Kal, shallan,dalinar y szeth) ,dudo que ninguno de ellos se pase al otro bando, shallan lo descontamos porque de duelos no tiene ni idea. Kal y Dalinar demasiado honorables y szeth parece que va por un camino de redención

    Quizás Eshonai se ajusta más,creo que además el último libro antes del time-skip era el suyo, por lo que podría encajar. Por lo que espero que sea ella y no Adolin

    El último libro es de Szeth. @yourigath sí he pensado en eso que me has puesto, pero prefería pensar en alguien de moral más ambigua, más gris, pero de los cuatro esos, solo Shallan tiene unos tonos lo suficiente mente pronunciados para “traicionar” a los demás, y la verdad es una idea que no me gusta nada, Gavilar era mi opción. Y por cierto sea Odium o su campeón mola que te ca…XD

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    eing on #5164

    Los ojos de tu propio hijo no te resultan conocidos, los conoces perfectamente, aunque no soy objetiva, Adolin es mi personaje preferido.
    Además, hace poco declaró que introdujo, o más bien desarrolló su personaje para resolver ciertos problemas que tenía con el arco de Dalinar, si desde un principio tenía claro quién sería el que puede destruir el mundo no creo que fuese un personaje secundario utilizado como recurso,que posteriormente desarrollo más porque le gusto. Creo que lo comentó en un FAQ-Friday

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    Yourigath on #5165

    Habéis pasado por alto una posibilidad…

    ¿Adolin? Demasiado obvio después de lo de Sadeas, siendo que es el único no Radiant… Aburrido
    ¿Shallan? Lo dudo… sus aptitudes no son para la guerra o la destrucción.
    ¿Szeth? Otra vez, demasiado obvio. Es el “malo” desde el principio




    ¿Dalinar? ¿Cual era el objetivo de Gavilar en el prólogo? Crear una guerra para unir a la gente… Ha habido guerra… Ha habido una Everstorm… Han despertado los Voidbringer… Y la gente sigue sin unirse. ¿Y un enemigo común más allá de todo eso? ¿El campeón de Odium? La armadura negra… el destello dorado… Blackthorn cargando de nuevo a la batalla con el poder de Odium y los Unmade a su espalda…

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    Violín
    Violín on #5166

    Es una teoría interesante. La espina negra y Dalinar son casi opuestos como un día soleado y un día nublado, puedes reconocer a uno en el otro pero son distintos. Lo que pasa es que no se si termino de entender tu teoría. Estas diciendo que Dalinar se convertirá en el campeón de Odium esperando que el campeón de Honor le derrote? Parece un movimiento arriesgado. Y Dalinar no es tan listo para engañar a un Dios, pero casa perfectamente con el desastre que se viene en el libro cinco. Lo que sí es verdad es que Honor tiene esperanzas en esto. El campeón de Honor obviamente sería Adolin. Que moriría a manos de Dalinar. Lo siento eing XD

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    Khriss on #5173

    Comentaré primero los caps y luego me uno a la discusión.

    Lo primero de todo son las partes del epigrafe. Oathbringer no solo es una espada si no tambien un libro. Mi teoria es que son las palabras de uno de los últimos bondsmiths y va hablarnos sobre lo que sucedió cuando los Radiantes nos abandonaron. Seguramente lo que aparezca sea el prefacio así que podremos leer solo esa parte del libro. Y como era de esperar el primer pov de Dalinar.

    El tema que se está discutiendo es Odium, su campeón y los Unmade. A mi me chocan muchas cosas de la descripción de el campeón de Odium, me perturba ese ojos conocidos que aunque puede encajar muy bien que sea Gavilar, creo que , y mal que me pese, veo un reconocerse por parte de Dalinar. No se si es una especie de Alter ego, o si será él. Tiendo a pensar que reconoce el sentimiento de lucha y ansia por matar como bien se verá en sus flashbacks, porque aunque cueste de creer Dalinar estaba puto loco de joven.

    El I need to write it anyway me hace afianzarme en lo que os he comentado arriba. El pov es de Adolin/Dalinar y no me esperaba un a Adolin tan pronto, pero siendo tema el asesinato es natural y tampoco tiene mucho qué.

    Me ha llamado la atención Kalami. No se porque, puede que no sea nada, pero mi sentido arácnido se ha activado. Tal vez es la segunda mujer que estaba con Gavilar aquella noche? No se….

    En cuanto al resto del cap, he de decir por si no lo había dicho nunca que ADORO a Palona. Es la mejor y Sebarial también. A nadie le duele la muerte de Sadeas cosa que no es de extrañar… Ya veremos su mujer como actua….

    He leído este capitulo como en 3 versiones distintas. No hay muchos cambios, uno que me ha llamado la atención es que en cambio de ser 34 años atrás en uno de los últimos borradores eran 36. Es una chorradita.
    En el cap se empieza a ver lo loco que era Dalinar como Blackthorn, y os puedo asegurar ,leído los 4 povs primeros de sus flashbacks, que esto va a peor…

    PD si veis que voy editando y tal no os asustéis que soy una patata para los comandos XD

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    Violín, espero que estés equivocado, pero no te puedo rebatir nada porque soy un desastre, el cosmere lo tengo cogido con pinzas y mi memoria da pena, pero me apasionan los libros de BS, y me encanta leer las teorías de la gente que entiende del tema.
    Lo único que me viene a la mente es que ¿porqué escoger a Adolín como campeón cuando puedes tener a Kaladin?

    Y una cosa que encontré muy interesante, que ninguno ha nombrado, y no sé si es que no tiene relevancia o ya es conocido y a mi se me había pasado por alto, es el detalle:
    “The men of Bridge Four had not bonded their own spren, and—though they had started manifesting powers—had lost their abilities when Kaladin had flown to Alethkar to warn his family of the Everstorm.”
    ¿Canalizará Kaladin sus poderes de alguna manera a los hombres del Puente Cuatro?

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    Khriss on #5179

    “The men of Bridge Four had not bonded their own spren, and—though they had started manifesting powers—had lost their abilities when Kaladin had flown to Alethkar to warn his family of the Everstorm.”
    ¿Canalizará Kaladin sus poderes de alguna manera a los hombres del Puente Cuatro?

    El tema de los Squires ya sale al final de Palabras Radiantes. Son gente que recibe investidura debido a su conexion con el Radiante y puede hacer lo que hace este siempre que esten a su lado. La cosa parece ser que de momento solo sabemos que los Corredores del viento tenian Squires seguramente alguna otra orden también.

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    Khriss on #5188

    Por cierto no se os ha hecho raro que aparezca shallan en el capitulo pero no dijiese nada? XD Ni una mención a su cara al ver el cadaver.

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    Sasori
    Sasori on #5189

    ¿Nadie vota por Elhokar como candidato a campeón de Odium? Tiene ojos conocidos para Dalinar y su armadura es dorada, que vale, lo de la armadura dorada esta muy pillado con pinzas para la visión, pero ya esta medio loco con los spren que ve por las paredes y le susurran cosas, podrían ser Cryptics, pero creo recordar que estos spren se acojonan con Kaladin y le dejan de molestar, no tiene mucho sentido que sean de los “buenos” y se asusten con Kaladin, dudo que los que veía Shallan les pasase igual.
    Claro que podría ser porque son spren de otro tipo, porque Elhokar tiene un vinculo mas débil que el de Shallan en su momento o vete tu a saber que. Pero me gustaría que fuesen spren de Odium tentándole con poder, total el chico ya esta bastante roto, y siente que nadie le respeta, presa fácil. Por imaginar que no sea…

    Dalinar ha optado al final por ser el anillo único y dominarlos a todos. Ya avisaba el diagram de algo similar:

    “Chaos in Alethkar is, of course, inevitable. Watch carefully, and do not let power in the kingdom solidify. The Blackthorn could become an ally or our greatest foe, depending on whether he takes the path of the warlord or not. If he seems likely to sue for peace, assassinate him expeditiously. The risk of competition is too great.”}

    (Taravangian es uno de los personajes más interesantes que hay, me encanta.)

    Que por cierto, también dice

    “One is almost certainly a traitor to the others.”

    podría tener que ver con el “And one of them will destroy us.” o simplemente con que Shallan ahora tiene a los Ghostbloods encima o a saber. Apenas tenemos dos libros y un cacho, podrían aparecer 30 personajes mas que nos descoloquen estas teorías, es difícil especular de algo tan lejano… Creo que nos va a ir mejor con teorías de cosas más cercanas, pero bueno, si cada uno votamos por un personaje distinto seguro que acertamos con el campeón de Odium xD.

    Yo solo pido que Elhokar no sea un radiante porque no me mola que todo quede en familia, que no son Targaryen macho queremos variedad.

    Por cierto no se os ha hecho raro que aparezca shallan en el capitulo pero no dijiese nada? XD Ni una mención a su cara al ver el cadaver.

    Puede que aun este con el shock postraumático de la visión de su pasado la pobre xD.

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    Yourigath on #5190

    podrían ser Cryptics, pero creo recordar que estos spren se acojonan con Kaladin y le dejan de molestar, no tiene mucho sentido que sean de los “buenos” y se asusten con Kaladin, dudo que los que veía Shallan les pasase igual.

    Precisamente… los Cryptics se llevan a matar con los Honorspren. Aunque ambos sean buenos son spren opuestos… Uno se alimenta del honor, el otro de mentiras.

    Yo sigo pensando que, como dice en el primer libro “And one of them will destroy us.” hace referencia a los 4 personajes de los que se habla en Camino de los Reyes. Y, también, hace referencia a los que ocurrirá en el 5º libro. Obviamente la saga no va a terminar con Roshar destruido, pero el primer arco puede terminar con una destrucción casi completa y el segundo arco empezar con el último reducto de humanidad aprovechando que Odium está a sus cosas *cough* Scadrial *cough* para contraatacar.

    A single awespren burst around Dalinar, like a ring of blue smoke. “Stormfather! Thakka, before today, I’d have bet you half the princedom that such a shot wasn’t possible.” He turned to the archer. “What’s your name, assassin?”

    The man raised his chin, but didn’t reply.

    “Well, in any case, welcome to my elites,” Dalinar said. “Someone get the fellow a horse.”

    “What?” the archer said. “I tried to kill you!”

    “Yes, from a distance. Which shows remarkably good judgment. I can make use of someone with your skills.”

    Vaya… ahora Blackthorn es Gengis Kan… XD

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